As pointed out late
last month the 2016 Victorian Premier’s Literary Award shortlists were
announced in early December and I will attempt (postage pending) to read and
review the poetry shortlist before the winners are announced on 28 January
2016.
Starting off with Alan
Loney’s “Crankhandle: Notebooks November 2010 – June 2012”. It is the latest part of an ongoing Notebook
series, with Sidetracks; Notebooks 1976 –
1991 being published by Auckland University Press in 1998 and the longer
unpublished section Melbourne Journal:
Notebooks 1998-2003 fitting in between the two published works.
We have a preface by
the poet and an introduction by Michael Farrell to open this slim book, before
you suddenly notice a meticulous attention to “visual design”, as our
introduction points out, “this is not an aesthetic concern only, but one that
enables reading: lucid aspect as well as articulated ‘cry’.”
Our ‘poem” or Notebook
is primarily about the craft of writing, the mechanics, the creation, the fact
that ‘a book’ becomes ‘a public place.
Writing as performance – not as theatre, or anything
acted out for another, nothing that can be seen by
anyone else – but the act of scribbling, or scrawling
marks on paper, independently of any semantic
reference or attempt to ‘tell a story’ or inform or
persuade or move – as a straightforward function
of the body that can be done well or badly – and
independently of intention or expectation or
nature or the politics of result
acted out for another, nothing that can be seen by
anyone else – but the act of scribbling, or scrawling
marks on paper, independently of any semantic
reference or attempt to ‘tell a story’ or inform or
persuade or move – as a straightforward function
of the body that can be done well or badly – and
independently of intention or expectation or
nature or the politics of result
The placement and
creation of wordscapes in evident from the first pages:
utterance = saying something stutterance
= not saying something
poetry = utterenace&stutterance revealing/concealing
repeating/repealing
repeating/repealing
As a collection of
observances and awareness of current time and place the periphery plays an important
role, words are signs, as you read you are frequently outside of yourself. This
is a word sculpture, featuring double, or parallel texts, italics, open
parenthesis with no closing, blank spaces of contemplation. So much so I could
actually visualise this work on the walls of a stark open gallery, the
thoughts, or notes, scribbled in various places throughout the space.
‘underworld’ = all the world one cannot see
or experience at any moment
or experience at any moment
‘peripheral vision’ = edges of the underworld
hem of the underworld
hem of the underworld
As I mentioned in the
opening, this is a very slim work, however as Michael Farrell says in his “Introduction”
(this also appearing on the back cover), ‘Crankhandle
is a conceptually thick book, a book of thought, or as Frost might say, a book
of ‘thinks’, that challenges writing’s potential triviality on a word-by-word
basis.’
As previously
mentioned there are open parenthesis throughout, alluding to a thought, a
fragment that is “without end”, as we are told “the mind’s a graveyard”. But
let’s not forget;
the poem as the last
unparaphraseable chunk
of language left to us
unparaphraseable chunk
of language left to us
all the words
in all the tongues
from all the times
from every place
piled up in a heap
before you
in all the tongues
from all the times
from every place
piled up in a heap
before you
you will make
nothing
of them
nothing
of them
As you can see from
these brief excerpts, the sections of this work are made of simple
instantaneous moments, fragments, do they build to a cohesive whole? As our
writer points out, all we have are moments, fragments, do they make a whole? A meditation on our environment and capturing that moment in writing, small vignettes, epigrams (speaking of which the writing system features in the epigram to this book), notes??? Food for thought? - yes.
The book finishes with
the ‘poem’ “& another thing” a three and a half page musing on writing
continuing on from the larger “Crankhandle”, as though the art of creation, the
written word is not restricted to a simple space, it leaks over;
do I
merely copy words down, another
Bartleby, who’d prefer to do
nothing else with is time
with his body
merely copy words down, another
Bartleby, who’d prefer to do
nothing else with is time
with his body
while the notebook
lies open and waiting for all the words
of the world to drop, like this unexpected
spider
onto the page
I know a few Melville and Enrique Vila-Matas
fans who would find that quote quite pertinent.
This is more than a book of poetry, it is a
creation, sculpture, mulling on the transient nature of language, the written
word, the printed word, (the Crankhandle of the title alluding to a printing
press?) As our writer points out:
I
a no possible poet of
place, and no longer care
what others think poets ought
to be doing
place, and no longer care
what others think poets ought
to be doing
A revelation, a work to be revisited and mulled
over many many times, as the publication alludes to, it is “without end”.
Personally a highlight of my Australian poetry reading of the last few months
and in my mind a substantially more important and enjoyable holistic work than
any on the Prime Minister’s Literary Award Shortlist (I know they are from
different years!!!) and that points to it being a serious contender for the
gong at the awards night later this month, and then possibly the Prime Minister’s
Award at the end of the year.
Source - Personal Copy - you can purchase the book direct from the publisher here.
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